本节课运用任务型教学法。课前，学生在独立学习中重读短文完成任务，在小组学习中互助互学，合作解答疑难；课中，学生通过独立学习、小组学习和全员学习，突破重点和难点，重新概括并进行要点写作，对照范文，评议选文；课后，学生完成另一个读写任务，强化读写技能，巩固写作微技能，以此有效备考，冲刺高考。
1.课前
任务1：重读短文，强化理解。重新阅读“读写任务”短文，力求理解短文的主要内容。
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Family values are principles that help to define us as human beings.These values are learned，usually passed down from generation to generation，but can also change over time，depending upon the circumstances in which families find themselves.They shape the way we behave；they help families stick together；and they give us our identity.
We always admire a person who treats the elderly with respect，or helps people in need，or is always honest with others.Such admirable behaviour is usually a direct result of the values that person was taught by his family.
These values or principles—respect，fairness and honesty among many others—also help hold the family together in times of trouble.When problems arise，the family is able to withstand them because they share the same idea about what is important.When family members have pressure from the outside world，they know they can come to their family for a comfort.
Finally，family values make us who we are.When we talk about our personal character and what influences our decisions，we do so based on the values given to us by our family.
【写作内容】
1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120词就“家庭价值观”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你认为家庭价值观重要吗？为什么？
（2）你们家的价值观是什么？
（3）请以你个人的经历说明你们家的价值观对你的影响。
任务2：整合词语，重构段落。根据所读短文，按照要求完成相关任务。
词意匹配：请把下列英语翻译成汉语，然后给出同义表达，并完成语篇填空。
续表
【设计说明】这项任务旨在培养学生对词语的正确理解及灵活运用，使其感悟词语在句中的多种用法，学会活用词语，为概括作铺垫。
任务3：佳句对译。请将下列句子进行英汉互译，注意词句表达的特点。
①Family values are principles that help to define us as human beings.
②它们（家庭价值观）塑造了我们的行为方式，帮助家人团结，赋予我们个性特点。
③We always admire a person who treats the elderly with respect，or helps people in need，or is always honest with others.
④Finally，family values make us who we are.
⑤我们谈论自己的人格以及影响我们决策的因素时，是以家庭赋予我们的价值观为基础的。
【设计说明】这项任务旨在检验学生对重点疑难句理解的程度，使学生认识英汉词句的结构差异，从中学会遵循英汉语言各自的表达规律与结构特点。
【参考答案】
①家庭价值观定义了我们作为人类应遵守的法则。
②They（The family values）shape the way we behave；they help families stick together；and they give us our identity.
③我们一向敬佩尊敬老人的人、乐于助人的人、诚实待人的人。
④最终，家庭价值观使我们成为我们自己。
⑤When we talk about our personal character and what influences our decisions，we do so based on the values given to us by our family.
2.课中
任务4：分析短文，概括短文。
（1）话题讨论
①What do you think a family refers to？
②What holds your family together generally speaking？
③What plays an important role in your family？
（2）概要讨论
阅读短文，分析文章主要讲了几方面的内容，应该围绕哪些方面进行概括。
【指导说明】概要要求从两方面概括，在概要中有条理地整合以下两个要点：
①什么是家庭价值观？
②家庭价值观在家庭凝聚力和个人品质的形成中扮演着怎样的角色？
（3）概括方法
分析短文结构，划分段落并找出主题句，提取关键词并概括。
第一步，通读全文，领略大意。
第二步，总结每段的大意。
第三步，根据段落大意及作者表达的侧重点，归纳短文大意。
①定文体：说明文；定时态：一般现在时、一般过去时 ；定人称：第三人称。
②找主题：阅读短文，分析段落，找出主题句，确定关键词，用近义词加以替换、拓展。
③定技巧：按段落大意重组语句，构成概括段。
任务5：词语填空，概括演练。
阅读短文，分析结构，整合段意，找出段落主题句和其中的关键词；根据句意，对照表格，填空完成句意改写，然后鉴赏、润色、纠错、概括，最后对照原文修改，重新概括，提升读写能力。
首先分析文章的段落大意，找出主题句、关键词，对照表格填写所缺词语，完成词句练习。
续表
总结：文章介绍了什么是家庭价值观，说明家庭价值观在家庭凝聚力和个人品质的形成中扮演着重要的角色。
【设计说明】这项任务重点在于引领学生如何阅读文章，从中提取关键信息，运用多种词语概括，锤炼语言知识的应用和表达能力。
任务6：表达要点，拓展词语，评议选文，继续写作。
（1）你认为家庭价值观重要吗？为什么？（阐述观点）
【指导说明】首先提炼写作要点中的关键词，用多种形式的英语进行表达训练，然后根据“主题句+支撑句”的写作模式，对范文和选文的语言进行鉴赏、对比、评议和纠错，最后对照原文修改，并继续写作，巩固写作微技能。
【范文鉴赏】Family values are what we live by，always directing what we do and what decisions we make.A child is born into a family and becomes part of the society later.There have to be certain principles in place to determine one's behavior and ensure a harmonious society.
【选文①】As far as I am concerned，I think family values or principles play an important part in our life.*Due to the family value is different family have different value or principle，so it have different influence for themselves.The family values can teach us what we should do or what we shouldn't do and help us solve problems.【刘沛珍，2分（概括满分5，下同）+16分（正文满分20，下同），带*号的句子为语法错误的句子，下同】
【润色①】 As far as I am concerned，family values…life.Due to the fact that different families have different values or principles，family values have different influences on each family.The family values…solve problems.
【选文②】From my perspective，family values are necessary to a family.*They can not only make us behave well，but also help us form some precious qualities，such as honesty，warm-hearted，good temper and so on.【陈文玉，2分+15分】
【润色②】From my perspective，family values are necessary to a family.…such as being honest，warm-heartedness，good temper and so on.
【独立写作】___________________________
【小组展评】___________________________
【全员评议】___________________________
（2）你们家的价值观是什么？
【指导说明】首先重新阅读短文中有关“价值观”的内容，从中找出相关的价值观填入表格，然后拓展相应的价值观，根据“主题句+支撑句”的写作模式，对范文和选文进行鉴赏、对比、评议和纠错，最后围绕“讲述自己的家庭价值观”展开写作。
【范文鉴赏】My family values were primarily shaped by my mother.*As a child，she always reminded me to be punctual and to work harder.But her greatest gift was teaching me the importance of honesty.She taught me that mistakes in life were unavoidable，but I should never sacrifice my honesty to cover for my mistakes.
【范文润色】范文有错误。…As a child，she always reminded me to be punctual and to work harder.润色为：As/When I was a child，she always reminded me…harder.句中的she是指my mother，从as a child来看，child应该是指代I并非my mother。
【选文①】*Our family values are various that families should respect and honest with each other and we should help each other when in trouble.*What's more，families should be always keep a optimistic attitude towards life.【姚嘉欣，3分+14分】
【润色①】Our family values are so various that my family members always respect and are honest to each other.We help each other when in trouble.What's more，the members are always keeping an optimistic attitude towards life.
【选文②】*As for my family，they always ask me to be an honest and grateful man as well as show respect to others.What's more，they also admire people who always lend a hand to others in need.
【润色②】 As for my family，they always ask me to be an honest and grateful man as well as show respect to others.What's more，my family also admire people who always lend a hand to others in need.
【独立写作】___________________________
【小组展评】___________________________
【全员评议】___________________________
（3）请以你个人的经历说明你们家的价值观对你的影响。
【指导说明】首先针对写作要点寻找最佳句式表达，然后根据“主题句+支撑句”的写作模式，对范文和选文的语言进行鉴赏、对比、评议和纠错，最后采取“叙述+结论”的方式进行写作。
【范文鉴赏】Honesty has been with me ever since.In my daily life，I'm always willing to admit to errors and never pretend to be all-knowing.That's why many friends come to me for help.They know I'll be straight-forward and tell them the truth，not only the things they want to hear.As my mother said，“When we're honest，we earn others' trust and society's credit.”
【选文】Under our family values，I benefit a lot.Once I failed the exam and I felt very sad.When I returned home my parents didn't blame me，but comforted me and adviced me to be optimistic.*They told me that tomorrow will be better，and then I refreshed and insisted on working hard with a optimistic attitude.Finally，I succeed.A good family value is important for everyone.【姚嘉欣，3分+14分】
【润色】Under our family values，…I felt very sad.When…comforted me and advised me to be optimistic.They told me…and then I refreshed myself and…with an optimistic attitude.Finally，I succeeded .Obviously，a good family value is important for everyone.
【独立写作】___________________________
【小组展评】___________________________
【全员评议】___________________________
任务7：阅读选文，欣赏与评议。
阅读下列读写任务试卷中的选文佳作，运用概括和要点表达等程序分析、评议和润色该作品，并重新评分。
*Family values is of great importance for us to behave politely，hold the families together when in difficulties，create our good quality.*It will change when families pass down from generation to generation.
*I firmly support the view about the author say.Family values play an important part in our life.*It will make an influence on us deeply.What we do and how we do is based on our family values.*It teaches us how to be a person and behave politely.So family values are very vital for us.
Different family values vary from family to family.But they are effective and useful to family members.My family value is honesty.*Every members in our home should be honest.We are not allowed to tell a lie.Because it is cheated behavior.When I was a child，I was taught to be honest.Up to now，I still obey the value.*My parents explained to me，honesty is a important factors in society and also important to make friends.*No matter who you come across，you are supposed to honest and sincere to get along with him.
*I am now have many friends thanks to my family value，it made me learned how to honest to make friends never tell lies to them.*So my friends are believe me and willing to make friends with me.They regarded me a reliable friend as a loyal guard.*My family value encourage me to form a habit of never tell a lie.
【选文作者介绍】江欣欣在广州市英语“二测”中全卷得分114.5分，加上高考听说成绩12分（听说满分为15分），她的总得分为126.5分。她的“二测”完形填空26分（满分30分），阅读48（满分50分），基础写作13（满分15分），读写任务17分（满分25分），其中概括得2分（满分5分），正文得15分（满分20分）。
【首段润色】Family values are of great importance for us to behave politely，hold the families together when in difficulty ，and create our good quality.They will change when families pass down from generation to generation.
【首段评议】首段作为概括段涵盖了阅读原文的主要内容，句子结构合理，但语法错误较多，评分严格，只给2分，其实可以获得更高分。
【正文要点①润色】I firmly support the view about what the author says.Family values play an important part in our life.They will have an influence on us deeply.What we do and how we do is based on our family values.They teach us how to be a person and behave politely.So family values are very vital for us.
【正文要点①评议】第二段作为正文要点①，第一句承上启下，表明选文作者认同阅读短文作者的观点，紧接着第二句表达第一个写作要点。从中不难看出，句子的基本结构框架清晰，写作要点表达完整，句意清楚，但词汇和语法错误较多。
【正文要点②润色】 Different family values vary from family to family.But they are effective and useful to family members.My family value is honesty.Every member in my family is honest.We are not allowed to tell a lie，because it is a cheated behavior.When I was a child，I was taught to be honest.Up to now，I still obey the value.My parents explained to me，honesty is an important factor in society and it's also important to make friends.No matter who you come across，you are supposed to be honest and sincere to get along with him.
【正文要点②评议】第三段作为正文要点②，写作要点表达完整、清晰，句子衔接流畅，但主要问题仍是词汇和语法错误。
【正文要点③润色】I now have many friends thanks to my family values，which make me learn how to be honest to make friends and never tell lies to them.So my friends believe me and are willing to make friends with me.They regard me as reliable a friend as a loyal guard.My family values encourage me to form a habit of never telling a lie.
【正文要点③评议】选文作者的思路一直都很清晰，能够紧扣写作要点来表达主要内容，在结束段中还能照应主题。
【润色自己的习作】___________________________
【小组互评】___________________________
【全员润色】___________________________
3.课后
任务8：回炉练习，巩固技能。
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
One day，a mother horse told her son，“My child，will you happily go and carry this bag of wheat to the mill to grind it into flour？”The little horse agreed without hesitation，and ran out of the house with a bag of wheat on his back.
After quite a long journey，the little horse came to a river，which blocked his path to the mill.He suddenly got confused.Looking around，he saw a cow.So he asked the cow，“Auntie Cow，can you tell me whether I can cross the river？”The cow answered，“Definitely you can.The water is very shallow.”When the little horse was about to cross the river，a squirrel shouted to him，“Little horse，don't cross the river.You will drown.”The little horse didn't know what to do，so he decided to go back to ask his mother.
After he told his mother everything that happened on his way，his mother said，“My child，it's not enough to only listen to others；you have to give it a try by yourself，and then you'll know the answer.”
With those words，he walked carefully across the river.The water was neither shallow nor deep.It was just fine for him.Finally，the little horse crossed the river and completed his task.
【写作内容】
1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120词就“亲身实践”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你读完这个故事后的感受；
（2）讲述一次你通过亲身实践学会一项技能的经历；
（3）你从这次经历中体会到的“亲身实践”的重要性。
【参考范文】
A little horse，with his mother's encouragement，tried to cross the river himself and found it was neither as shallow as the cow had told him nor as deep as the squirrel had described.
The story gives me a deep and lasting impression when reading it.It tells us that we should not fear the things we cannot predict.We should courageously challenge ourselves and accumulate life experience little by little.
I'd always wanted to go skating，but I doubted whether I could make it because some of my friends said it was very easy while others found it quite difficult.Fortunately，my elder brother encouraged me to give it a shot，so I did.During the practice，I found it hard to balance my body.I sought advice from experienced skaters and kept practicing.It was because of the constant attempts I had made that I gradually got the hang of the skills of skating and was capable of balancing my body.
From this experience，I am convinced that genuine knowledge comes from real practice.Only when we experience everything on our own can we gain true knowledge for our life.
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